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Комментарий к фанфику: Летучий корабль


1 апреля 2013 к фанфику Летучий корабль
Написано после 26 главы и к ней же..

I've seen his eyes so many times
I used to watch his hate
I didn't know he always lies
When he's afraid of fate

And I believed for such long time
He loved her deep to death
And then he got to me and laugh
The memories were faked

Let's think of me six years ago
I thought I was all fine
But only now I better know
Those years I was just blind

I had a life, a home, a job
I lost that all at once
And I was took away from bonds
By this who laughs and lies

Being saved for slaves
Enough to feel the shame
But lost to him and be his serf -
I had just him to blame

I tried to fight, it was so hard
He won this battle field
I'll never show I'm hauling flag
I knew I'll find the lead

I'll find the path to rule my ship
Of future life and fate
I'm just afraid of him 'no hate'
Of me 'in love' afraid.


Не ругайте сильно мои рифмы и ритм, для меня это первый опыт рифмоплетства. И все грамматические неровности допущены в пользу ритму и рифме=)
Пс: не знаю, почему на английском. Так написалось.


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