Sorry for my English, but smth happened with y keyboard. =)
I really enjoy this story, the style of tale is beautiful, ideas are original and speech structure in narrative is excellent!
But, to my mind the story isn`t finish! Maybe, you hadn’t really thought up about ending of this story... But, when I`d read the last sentence, I was really upset... `Coz relations between Severus and Harry had been better, I`d thought that there would be continued..
But it was your right to finish this story just in that moment =)
And, of course I had by no means to convict you.
I`d a really good time, reading your creativity!
Thank u)