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K-Riddle Комментирую некоторые предыдущие диалоги. 1) "Дары смерти" Вход в башню Гриффиндора исчез, а новая сцена появилась не сразу. Гарри словно летел сквозь сменяющиеся цвета и формы, пока мир вокруг него вновь не принял ясные очертания. Он стоял в темноте на пустынной, холодной вершине холма, и ветер свистел в голых ветвях деревьев. Взрослый Снегг тяжело дышал и беспокойно крутился на месте, крепко сжимая волшебную палочку, явно в ожидании чего-то или кого-то. Страх Снегга передался Гарри, хотя он знал, что бояться ему нечего, и он поглядел через плечо, пытаясь догадаться, чего ждет здесь Снегг… --- Дамблдор взмахнул палочкой. Листья по-прежнему летели по ветру, но там, где стояли они со Снеггом, стало совсем тихо. Скорее всего, дело осенью 1980 было. 2) "Тайная комната". Malfoy glanced witheringly at Percy. ‘And what’re you doing down here, Weasley?’ he sneered. Percy looked outraged. ‘You want to show a bit more respect to a school Prefect!’ he said. ‘I don’t like your attitude!’ "Узник Азкабана". "I said, that's enough," said Mrs. Weasley, depositing her shopping in an empty chair. "Hello, Harry, dear. I suppose you've heard our exciting news?" She pointed to the brand-new silver badge on Percy's chest. "Second Head Boy in the family!" she said, swelling with pride. "And last," Fred muttered under his breath. I don't doubt that," said Mrs. Weasley, frowning suddenly. "I notice they haven't made you two prefects." Тимур наверное вы правы. Лили и Люпин были старостами и факультета, и школы. "Проскочить", по-видимому, ступени нельзя. 3) "Дары смерти" Lily and Snape were walking across the castle courtyard, evidently arguing. Harry hurried to catch up with them, to listen in. As he reached them, he realized how much taller they both were. A few years seemed to have passed since their Sorting. “ . . . thought we were supposed to be friends?” Snape was saying, “Best friends?” “We are, Sev, but I don’t like some of the people you’re hanging round with! I’m sorry, but I detest Avery and Mulciber! Mulciber! What do you see in him, Sev, he’s creepy! D’you know what he tried to do to Mary MacDonald the other day?” Lily had reached a pillar and leaned against it, looking up into the thin, sallow face. “That was nothing,” said Snape. “It was a laugh, that’s all— ” “It was Dark Magic, and if you think that’s funny— ” “What about the stuff Potter and his mates get up to?” demanded Snape. His color rose again as he said it, unable, it seemed, to hold in his resentment. “What’s Potter got to do with anything?” said Lily. “They sneak out at night. There’s something weird about that Lupin. Where does he keep going?” “He’s ill,” said Lily. “They say he’s ill— ” “Every month at the full moon?” said Snape. “I know your theory,” said Lily, and she sounded cold. “Why are you so obsessed with them anyway? Why do you care what they’re doing at night?” “I’m just trying to show you they’re not as wonderful as everyone seems to think they are.” The intensity of his gaze made her blush. “They don’t use Dark Magic, though.” She dropped her voice. “And you’re being really ungrateful. I heard what happened the other night. You went sneaking down that tunnel by the Whomping Willow, and James Potter saved you from whatever’s down there— ” Snape’s whole face contorted and he spluttered, “Saved? Saved? You think he was playing the hero? He was saving his neck and his friends’ too! You’re not going to— I won’t let you— ” “Let me? Let me?” Lily’s bright green eyes were slits. Snape backtracked at once. “I didn’t mean— I just don’t want to see you made a fool of— He fancies you, James Potter fancies you!” The words seemed wrenched from him against his will. “And he’s not . . . everyone thinks . . . big Quidditch hero— ” Snape’s bitterness and dislike were rendering him incoherent, and Lily’s eyebrows were traveling farther and farther up her forehead. “I know James Potter’s an arrogant toerag,” she said, cutting across Snape. “I don’t need you to tell me that. But Mulciber’s and Avery’s idea of humor is just evil. Evil, Sev. I don’t understand how you can be friends with them.” То есть, Лили утверждает, что Северус - "лучший друг" (!!!), а Джеймс - "высокомерное заносчивое ничтожество" ("toerag" имеет сильнейший негативный смысл, а не просто "безмозглый задавака", как РОСМЭН перевёл). И сразу же категорично встаёт на сторону "заносчивого ничтожества", а не "лучшего друга". И ещё и покраснела, когда он упомянул про него. Значит, она уже явно в хороших отношениях с "ничтожеством" была, тем более, он доверил ей секрет Тоннеля. Очень лицемерное поведение. 4) "Кубок огня" "And so you volunteer to go and fetch me a substitute? I wonder...perhaps the task of nursing me has become wearisome for you, Wormtail? Could this suggestion of abandoning the plan be nothing more than an attempt to desert me?" "My Lord! I -- I have no wish to leave you, none at all --" "Do not lie to me!" hissed the second voice. "I can always tell, Wormtail! You are regretting that you ever returned to me. I revolt you. I see you flinch when you look at me, feel you shudder when you touch me..." Петтигрю не был сильным окклюментом. Риддл чувствовал его ложь даже в развоплощённом состоянии. Значит, и Дамби мог его залегилиментить без особых проблем. Но не сделал. Вывод - Дамблдор полностью провалился в защите семьи Поттеров. |