Testing waters (слэш)

Once upon a time, after her great adventures, Lorelei was wondering what to do that week. She had picked up her life from where she left it and wanted to make something from it. Then all the sudden a strange woman appeared on Lorelei's doorstep. She was hiden beneath a long cloak and had long brown nails on her fingers. Her dirty hair fluished down from beneath the cloak and she had glowing eyes!
"You are not who you think you are!" said the strange woman.
"What do you mean?" said Lorelei
"You are not who you think you are," she said again with a mysterious crackling voice like a bad radio transmission.