A Light in the Darkness (джен)

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Delia Malfoy can think of nothing but her Hogwarts letter. Will it come? Will father allow her to go if it does? She rarely leaves the Manor, and has dreams of being free of her abusive father. His cold and sometimes cruel ways have left her feeling so alone. All she wants to do is go to school, and make a friend. Maybe away from fathers constant glare, Draco would even be the brother she had always hoped he would be. His need for fathers constant approval has created a distance between the two young Malfoys, and she missed the close relationship they once had.