Samus2001
А это в первом приближении есть. Возражений на уточнения он не нашёл, что харакутерно)

Plot Armor
Original Observation: HJPEV escapes death via cunning (e.g., transfiguration traps), with prophecy and intellect ensuring his wins. His victories feel authorially assured rather than narratively earned.

Your Note: “In their confrontation, Tom Quirrell starts to openly yield to HJPEV. He holds lengthy discussions with him (rational mind hardly would spend time on this). He magically undresses him (but leaving him with glasses and wand, no less), and Death Eaters are positioned in such a way that they all are visible to HJPEV. His transfigured monowire is actually described as visible in moonlight, but nobody notices.”

Elaboration:
Quirrell’s Yielding Behavior: Quirrell, as Voldemort, is a cunning, paranoid genius—yet in the climax, he indulges HJPEV in prolonged debates instead of killing him outright. A rational villain would eliminate the threat, not monologue, especially given Voldemort’s history of ruthless efficiency. This contrivance gives HJPEV time to execute his plan, a classic plot armor trope.

Convenient Undressing: Stripping HJPEV but leaving his glasses and wand—his key tools—is an inexplicable oversight. A competent enemy would disarm him fully, yet Quirrell’s lapse ensures HJPEV retains agency, defying logic for narrative convenience.

Death Eaters’ Positioning: Placing all Death Eaters in HJPEV’s line of sight is tactically absurd—Voldemort’s followers should be spread out, vigilant, not clustered like targets. This setup hands HJPEV a perfect shot, stretching believability.

Visible Monowire: The transfigured monowire—his trump card—is described as glinting in moonlight, yet no one, not even Voldemort’s heightened senses, notices. This glaring visibility should foil the plan, but the text ignores it, shielding HJPEV from failure.

Updated Mary Sue Risk: This confrontation reeks of plot armor—Quirrell’s uncharacteristic incompetence and the scene’s contrived details (wand retention, visible wire) stack the deck in HJPEV’s favor. It’s not just luck; it’s the world warping to ensure his triumph.

Revised Balance: Almost none—every element aligns to protect HJPEV, with no credible threat piercing his defenses.

Comparison to HP: Original Harry’s plot armor (e.g., surviving Avada Kedavra) involves luck and sacrifice (Lily’s love, allies’ deaths), not enemy incompetence. Voldemort never “yields” to HP—he’s undone by his own hubris (wand ownership). HJPEV’s victory relies on Quirrell’s inexplicable lapses, amplifying his Mary Sue invulnerability.